我最喜欢的生日礼物

I have a party on my eleven birthday, many friends give me the present. There is a doll, a pen, a music box, a notebook, a book and a flower. My faverite present is the flower. The flower is very beautiful. Its colour is red. I like to smell it. I put it in a bottle of water. My mother says it is a rose. I can plant it in the pot. I water the flower everyday. I wish it can be beautiful forever.

在我11岁生日派对的时候，很多朋友给我送了礼物。礼物有一个洋娃娃，一支钢笔，一个音乐盒，一本笔记本，一本书，还有一朵花。我最喜欢的礼物是花。这朵花非常漂亮。它的颜色是红色的，我喜欢闻它。我把它放到一瓶水里。我妈妈说这是一朵玫瑰。我可以把它种在花盆里。我每天都给它浇水，我希望天能永远美下去。